To hold the main atmosphere, a no hooks at the end of the series. . I will say right away that those who read reviews about the series to find out whether or not the audience wants to watch it, get my opinion as a viewer - BE.
Who else is interested and why the viewer wants to see where it is possible to lead the vector so that the viewer does not ' switched the channel' after the first series and forgot the project, this is my opinion: a very bad idea to introduce the character of the actor Pal. And here's why: as a spectator, I am immersed in the universe of strip clubs, through which the entire life of its inhabitants is shown. The characters, one way or another, are directly related to the main branch of the series: father and son. Even the friend of the waitress in love with the hero of Tsyganov also looks ' to place'.
But here comes his older brother. Why? This is a third-level branch. Well, maybe it will open up later, but why put it in so early? And so many plot lines are in 'cabaret' the world and they are related. But then the older brother appears, appears early, when the rest of the lines are only presented and have not begun to open, and then we are thrown another after after after after. I understand that you need a hook for the second series and Pal is a good actor, attracts attention. Yeah. But for now, it's superfluous. Another hook is needed, which is associated with the already known line of characters. The fire just broke the atmosphere. As a spectator, by the end of the pilot, I had already begun to speculate about the fate of the characters, their connection to the world, and how they would affect it. And then suddenly Pal is a paratrooper hero who does not like his brother's clothes. And now I'm thinking, who is this? How can he wedge into this world? And having not really started to empathize with the main characters, not choosing which thread to give preference to, I am given a serviceman at the end. My brain flies out of the world 'cabaret' He no longer thinks about the fate of the main characters. The atmosphere is being destroyed by the servicemen. I don’t want to watch the second series anymore.
Please, at the editing or editing of the script, enter the hero later. The rest of the characters and their branches will not lose from this, and the audience will be at least one more.
For the atmosphere
7 out of 10
Original