There are 2 things that have influenced my appreciation of this creation. Where to start? Yes, perhaps, with what I consider superfluous, namely a storyline with illness and rites. This greatly overloaded the plot and shifted attention to a sick woman, who, in addition to everything at the end of her life path, also had a hallucination,
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There are 2 things that have influenced my appreciation of this creation. Where to start? Yes, perhaps, with what I consider superfluous, namely a storyline with illness and rites. This greatly overloaded the plot and shifted attention to a sick woman, who, in addition to everything at the end of her life path, also had a hallucination, substitution of the actual desired; the rapprochement and birth of a relationship could be shown differently, it was not necessary to introduce this character into the script. As for the second comment, this is related to the characterization of the main characters. Looks like they got mixed up. Such a chaste, religious, observing the traditions of Naomi and suddenly takes the initiative in a relationship. At the same time, Michelle, seemingly free from prejudice, first experiences doubts, perhaps even guilt, and eventually puts an end to her relationship with Naomi. In addition, according to the idea, she should be a rebel, only now she forgot to give rebellious qualities. What is her temper? Smoking in principle can be tied by the ears as a protest, disagreement with something, but this is speculation. Yes, at first she conflicts with her roommates because of her addiction and the ability to carry a phone, or rather a ban on carrying, but it looks superficial.
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